Autumn and Spring
Autumn and SpringHe was autumn, she was spring.I can do better than this she thoughtthe first time they met,then she saw the look in his eyes,all the tenderness, and the caringwhat the hell she...
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How lucky we are that you share your delightful poetry! I liked the way the eyes said it all.
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enjoyed the opposite seasons turn and got a chuckle out of these lines, Terry. Quote:what the hell she thoughtand surrendered to him completelyAh, the surrendering leap of spring into uncertainty....
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Terry, Opposites that are more alike than not realize they are content and more like each other in many ways. I enjoyed your quick flip of the seasons to express this.Lorraine
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Thank you everyone. This is based on a true story of a couple I used to know. It was cute sitting there with them as they both sit there by the fireside and she smoking a miniturised version of his...
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This is just beautiful T,He was autumn,she was springNow she is summer he is winterI can't do better than this she thinksas they sit together in the firelightand she sees the look in his eyesthe...
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Thanks Mary, thats a lovely compliment. Partir cst mourir un peu.
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This one is a keeper, Teagan. I'm saving all your poems from now on, too. And those I comment on also. Spring is the best time for romance isn't it? You're right on time there. Theneva's...
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